Mond, the lighting is lovely. The texture is great. But I think the opacity needs toning down a bit. Also, texture on skin is never a good thing. I would have a look at masking hair and skin out and see how you go from there.
Love the work but agree, I would soften the texture on the skin.
Beautiful shot, very creative processing
I like the composition of this and the rich, warm colours. The white thermostat on the wall is a little distracting tho.